Saturday, March 21

kuchh gazal type ka chalega......okk pesh haiii....gour farmaiyega

Har ek aansu gam ka peekar ,

kyu hamei  aaj muskurane ki talab ho rhi hai?

Lagakar zeher ka jaam labo se ,

kyu hamei  aaj  jeen ki talab ho rhi hai?

tanha hi kat gaya safar-e-zindagi,

kyu hamei  aaj mehfilo mei zikra ki talab ho rhi hai?

Shagal tha doobne ka sinduri shamo mei,

kyu aaj sawere ki talab ho rahi hai?

sawan toh lagta tha jaise katne ko douda ho,

phir kyu hamei aaj bouchharon ki talab ho rahi haiii?

Gahre saagar banwar mei fanskar ,

kyu hamei  aaj kinare ki talab ho rhi hai?

Tere har izahar ko inkaar mei tabdeel kiya hamne,  

kyu phir  aaj tujhe paane ki talab ho rhi hai?

......phir kyu aaj tujhe paane ki talab ho rhi hai???????

6 comments:

बाल भवन जबलपुर said...

अच्छी रचना
बधाइयां

GANGA DHAR SHARMA said...

आपका ब्लाग वाकई बहुत अच्छा है. इसे नियमित रूप से अद्यतन करते रहिये . हार्दिक बधाई .

शोभा राजपुरोहित said...

shukriya dosto

किरण राजपुरोहित नितिला said...

Shobha
ek behtareen rachna ke liye badhai or bhavishay me aisi he urja banaye rakhna.

शोभा राजपुरोहित said...

Ji bhutt bhutt dhanyavaad...aur mei koshish karoongi aur bhi kuchh behtar likhne ji.

डॉ.ब्रजेश शर्मा said...

Shobha ji,

anubhuti ko pakadne ki emaandar koshish aur use abhivyakt karne ki betaabi taareef ke kabil hai.
Achchi gazlen padhiye nirantar.
shubhkaamnaayen !